Talk:General Ironeye/@comment-70.88.69.82-20150119163549

The concept is interesting. I would also go more into who Iron Eye used to be and explain his motive for fighting all these enemies. Try to show what he does outside of fighting. Maybe his life is lonely or maybe something else. I would show an in depth background of him later in the series. Create an enemy that he can't win and against and make Iron Eye flash back to the event that made him Iron Eye. Have him evaluate why he's really fighting all these enemies and have him explain his true motive. You want a rich, deep background that makes Iron Eye even more interesting.